What’s Up Wednesday

After a break last week, I’m back to a Wednesday blog, and this week it’s a What’s Up Wednesday contribution. WuW is a meme created by Jaime Morrow and Erin Funk. Check out their blogs to find out how to participate, and to see a list of other participants.

What I’m Reading

I just finished THE DAUGHTER OF TIME by Josephine Tey, and posted a review on Goodreads, so I won’t go into a lot of detail here. It’s a detective novel but with a couple of differences. First, the detective never leaves his room. In fact, he’s in hospital recovering from a broken leg, so he never leaves his bed! Second, the case is a genuine historical mystery: King Richard III and the mysterious death or disappearance of the princes in the Tower, for which Richard is traditionally blamed. Was Richard really guilty? Or was the story of wicked Uncle Richard a creation of the Tudors to soil his name and enhance the reputation of Henry VII, the king who succeeded him? While the historical mystery still remains, there are many good points brought out in the novel. The recent discovery of Richard’s remains in a car park doesn’t really impact the evidence presented in this story, since the modern investigation addressed more Richard’s physical appearance, not his character. However, one thing upon which Tey and the modern researchers agree is that the so-called contemporary accounts of Richard are not entirely trustworthy. Anyway, it’s a good book, and definitely worth reading if you’re interested in English history.

What I’m Writing

After a break for the WriteOnCon writing conference last week, I’m back to revising my novel. I re-wrote the query (even though it’s not ready to query) for WOC, and now I need to finish getting the novel ready for beta reading. I would like to get it to beta readers within the next few months, but I’m not going to rush revisions. Thankfully, I got some positive feedback last week that encourages me to get on with it, which leads nicely into…

What Inspires Me Right Now?

I’m feeling quite inspired by the nice comments, and constructive criticism I received for the pages I posted of my novel in the WOC forums last week. As regular readers know, I’ve been concerned about getting my female teenage alien’s voice just right, and from what people said, it sounds like I’m on the right track. Very encouraging.

What Else I’ve Been Up To

I noticed on the news yesterday that author Elmore Leonard died. I’m not going to pretend that I’m his number one fan, but I knew who he was, and recognize some of the books he’d written. One of the things he’s famous for is his Top Ten Rules of Writing. While there are a number of good things he says in these “rules,” I particularly like his summation of the rules: “If it sounds like writing, I rewrite it.” When I think of all the books I’ve read and loved, and think about what it was about them that made them stand out, it was the fact that the writing was so good, it was almost invisible. I was so absorbed in the text, I wasn’t thinking about the writing, I was just reading the story. That’s hard to achieve, but worth aiming for.

So, what’s been happening in your life this week?

 

cds

Colin D. Smith, writer of blogs and fiction of various sizes.

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32 Responses

  1. Good luck with your teenage alien voice! I’ve been reading a lot of great space YA lately (ALIENATED and THESE BROKEN STARS).

    • cds says:

      Thanks, Valerie, and thanks for the book tips! It’s hard to write a first-person female alien when you, as a writer, don’t fall into any of those categories–the complete opposite of “write what you know.” 🙂

  2. Alison Miller says:

    I really like that rule from his list too and something to keep in mind as I embark on revisions in (hopefully) the next few months. And AWESOME that you received such helpful feedback at writeoncon! Good luck with the writing this week!

  3. Congrats on getting such wonderful feedback from WOC. I think nailing a teenage girl’s voice is tricky even if you WERE a teenage girl at one point. My MC for my latest is a guy, and boy have I run into some unforeseen issues there. I’ve had to grill my partner on a couple of things.

    And I love that rule of writing. I’ve read books where the writing is effortless. It just seems to breathe off the page. Would that I could write like that. *sigh*

    Hope you have a great week and good luck with your revisions. 🙂

    • cds says:

      Thanks, Kris. And if it wasn’t hard enough trying to nail a teenage girl’s voice, I give myself an alien teenage girl. They call it masochism, don’t they? 🙂

  4. It’s always nice getting positive comments on our writing, glad you’re feeling inspired! An alien teenage girl – I’m not surprised you’re struggling! It sounds like you’re on the right track, though 🙂

    • cds says:

      Yes… sometimes I wonder what part of my brain comes up with ideas like this. But thankfully it seems to be working out. Thanks, Laura! 🙂

  5. Robin Moran says:

    In a way that novel reminds me of Rear Window. I think it’s quite an achievement to create a tense and enticing novel that revolves around a limited setting. Might have to give that book a shot. 🙂 Thanks for sharing!

    • cds says:

      You’re very welcome, Robin! And thanks for your comments on my pages during WOC. Both encouraging and helpful. Exactly what I needed. 😀

  6. Stephanie Scott says:

    I read Leonard’s Raylan after getting seriously hooked on Justified (such a brilliantly crafted and well acted TV show). He has a really unique style that’s sparse and gritty and exactly what I needed to read after 2+ years of mostly YA books. I love his comment about if it sounds like writing, rewrite it. I had this critique of someone’s writing several years ago but I didn’t know how to sum it up. I guess that’s what’s meant by something feeling overwritten. It’s clunky and reads like narration rather than the reader submersed into the reading experience. Wise words.

    Write On Con was good fun. Sad it’s over, but now I can get some writing done 🙂 Glad you found the comments helpful.

    • cds says:

      LOL–yes, I enjoyed WOC, but now I can get on with the work of making my WIP beta-ready… and getting to that short story I said I would write after WOC! AND figuring out what to do with the MG novel idea I had while listening to all the MG query pitches during WOC…!!

  7. Anna says:

    I completely forgot about WOC – I think you told me about it a few months ago. Of course, because I forgot about WOC I haven’t read any of the pages you posted, but from what I know about your wip it sounds like it would be a very good read. Good luck with the next stage of your writing!

    • cds says:

      I’m sorry you missed WOC–I should have reminded you. Oh well. Next year will be totally awesome, so go ahead and mark your calendar. 🙂

      Did you look at my revised query? I’ll be trolling for beta readers soon, so if you want to be considered… 🙂

  8. Julie Dao says:

    As you know, I really enjoyed your query and pages at WOC! Good luck revising! I’ll be in the same boat, madly wrapping up edits for ELEGY.

    • cds says:

      I really appreciate your encouraging comments on my WOC query and pages, Julie! I know your work is destined for great things. All the best with the edits. 🙂

  9. Erin L. Funk says:

    Sounds like WriteOnCon was really good this year. I wish I could have participated, but it fell at a bad time for me. That’s great that you got some good feedback on your WIP! Hope the inspiration from the conference lasts a good long while and that working on your WIP continues to go well!

    • cds says:

      Thanks! WOC was really good this year, Erin–and it’ll be even better next year. I hope it works out for you to attend next time.

  10. Be sure to check out CPSeek if you’re looking for beta readers. Good luck with the revision!

  11. Amy says:

    I fully enjoyed WriteOnCon. I got a lot out of it. Can’t wait until next year! I’m glad that you got some awesome feedback on your WIP. Good luck with your writing goals. Have a great weekend!

  12. katyupperman says:

    Sounds like you’re well on your way to querying, Colin. Best of luck polishing up your manuscript for your beta readers. And what perfect timing for WriteONCon. I’m so glad you were able to get lots of feedback, and that you “left” the conference feeling inspired! 🙂

  13. I loved WriteOnCon. I’m glad that you got some great feed back! I wasn’t brave enough to post anything. Maybe next year.

    • cds says:

      It’s so worth taking the plunge and getting your query/pages critiqued, Sarah. Most of the comments from others are constructive and helpful. They certainly encouraged me. 🙂

  14. I love that, Colin: “If it sounds like writing, rewrite it”. Excellent advice. So glad you had a fun WOC. I missed it this year but have loved it in the past. Such a great event. I have absolutely adored what you posted here from your alien girl protagonist. It was awesome. Can’t wait to see more!

    • cds says:

      Thank you, Kat–you’re very kind. I’m enjoying writing my alien girl. She’s a lot of fun, and I hope that comes out in the story. 🙂 WOC was great–I hope you can be a part of it next year!

  15. Jaime Morrow says:

    That’s great that you got good feedback on your WIP during WOC. That will definitely help you as you move forward with this story. I didn’t do the WOC thing this year, mostly because I wasn’t at a place in any of my stories where I could post anything. Maybe next year? I’m happy that so many people got a lot out of it, though. I like that Elmore Leonard quote you shared. Definitely something to think about while I’m writing. Hope you have a good week writing and otherwise, Colin! 🙂

    • cds says:

      Thanks, Jaime. I would never have thought I’d be quoting Elmore Leonard on my blog, but that is such a good quote, and so aptly describes what I sometimes feel is wrong with a book, and what I aspire to with my own writing.

      I also never thought I would quote Stephen King on my blog, but I have. Often! When someone’s right, they’re right–what can I say? 🙂

  16. Rebecca B says:

    It’s so great that Write On Con gave you good feedback and inspiration! I hope your revisions continue to go well, and you have a great week.

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