Writer Recharge Update 2

Here we are at the end of week two of the Writer Recharge challenge, a co-hosted event for the month of February intended to help us writers keep our eyes on the prize of making progress in our work. Thanks to Sara Biren, and her fellow challengers (Katy Upperman, Alison Miller, Liz Parker, and Elodie Nowodazkij) for setting this up. Visit their blogs for more details, and the linky list of other writers to visit.

I only have two goals to achieve. Here’s how I’m doing with them:

  • Get the novel ready for Beta Readers: I’ve revised the first four chapters, concentrating particularly on chapter one. This was one of the critiques from my First Readers: the information in the opening chapters was important, but not particularly… um… exciting. Kind of like reading the instruction manual before putting the IKEA bookcase together. Necessary, but not exactly page-turning. Hopefully that’s better now. There are other changes I need to make, and I probably could have got further except… well… I started reading the novel and got sucked in. This week, I need to concentrate on sharpening some plot points and finishing up the changes that need to be made before sending this out to Beta Readers (email me if you want to be a Beta Reader!).
  • Finish at least one short story: I hoped to have the first draft of the short story done by this time, but I haven’t. Thanks largely to some great YA Buccaneers Word Sprints, I made good progress, but it’s not finished yet. Maybe by next week, but I’m giving priority to the novel. If I can at least make more progress–say, at least another 1,000 words, that’ll be good.

That’s my update for week two. BTW, I’m serious about Beta Readers for my novel. If you’d like to volunteer, send me an email telling me so. What’s the novel about? If you don’t already know, here’s my query:

Pearl, a sixteen-year-old girl from the planet Maralan, is an Earthophile: she loves all things to do with the tech-savvy occupants of planet Earth. So when she gets the opportunity to visit anywhere, any time, she decides on London in 1978, a year when fashions were wild, and her favorite Earth band, ABBA, were still making music.

But a miscalculation ends up transporting her to London in the year 1879. She needs electricity to recharge her travel device, but Edison’s only just invented the light bulb. Stumbling into the home of the 14th Earl of Chiswick, a man of means and connections, seems like a step in the right direction. However, keeping her alien identity a secret from his inquisitive household, and his sharp-tongued, sharp-eyed 16-year-old daughter, while finding a way back to Maralan, might prove harder than she thought.

A TEENAGE ALIEN IN VICTORIAN LONDON is a 78,000 word YA Sci-Fi/Historical novel. Douglas Adams meets the big-house atmosphere of β€œDownton Abbey.”

Thanks, and have a wonderful Writer Recharge week! πŸ™‚

 

cds

Colin D. Smith, writer of blogs and fiction of various sizes.

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31 Responses

  1. Elodie says:

    And you’ve got mail πŸ™‚ I absolutely loved the excerpts you posted here πŸ™‚ It seems you’ve been doing well this week and getting sucked in into your novel is a pretty good feeling (and I think a good sign :-))
    Have a great day, Colin! and good luck for your goals!

    • cds says:

      Thank you, Elodie!! πŸ˜€ While going through revisions, I had an on-going love-hate relationship with this novel. Now I’ve let it rest a few weeks while First Readers were looking over it, I’m definitely loving it more than hating it. And you’re right–that’s a good sign. πŸ™‚

  2. E.Maree says:

    Good luck with your revising! I’m really swamped with beta manuscripts (it’s literally going to be mid-2014 before I’m done =( ) or I’d jump in.

  3. Alison Miller says:

    I have been intrigued with this story since you started talking about it, Colin, and I would be more than happy to volunteer if you need another reader! And aren’t those openings HARD?! Good luck with your goals this week! I hope to join in a YAB word sprint again soon! So fun and motivating. πŸ™‚

    • cds says:

      Yay! Thank you, Alison. Right now, I’d like to hear from anyone who wants to Beta Read for me. If I have more than enough emails from interested parties, I might have to pick Betas (which will be hard, because I’m sure you’ll all have worthy things to say)–but we’ll see about that.

      See you at the next YAB Word Sprint, perhaps! πŸ™‚

  4. kiperoo says:

    Ooooh! I’m sure I saw something about this story somewhere. Were you on WriteOnCon with it? That’s a great query–sounds like such a winner! I’m a bit full on reading at the moment, but I definitely want to read too. I probably couldn’t commit to reading the full right now, BUT maybe my recent experience with the First Five Pages workshop would make me good eyes for your beginning. I’d be happy to take a look! And best of luck with the rest of your revisions!

    • cds says:

      Yes, I did float my query and pages around WriteOnCon last August, and got some very valuable feedback then. You’re absolutely right about the opening pages, and I am particularly concerned with getting them right–so you might be hearing from me. πŸ™‚ Thanks, Kip!

  5. Robin Moran says:

    I’d say that was a good sign, getting sucked into your story. I’ve always believed that if an author is hooked and in love with their story, readers, editors, and agents will believe in it too.

    I love the description of your book. Douglas Adams meets Downtown Abbey! Definitely don’t see that everywhere so you’ve got originality for sure.

    • cds says:

      I agree, Robin–how can I sell my story to an agent with any kind of conviction if I don’t love it first? Passion and enthusiasm are infectious. You know that as a teacher. It’s true in marketing too.

      I thought hard about comp titles to put in the query, even searching Amazon for books like it, and I struggled. That might be just my limited literary experience, but the Adams/Downton comparison is about the closest I could come up with. Perhaps my Betas will be able to refine it more… but for now, I think it fits, and I like it. πŸ™‚

  6. I am not a happy reviser πŸ™‚ but so happy YOU are revising! have a great #writerrecharge week!

    • cds says:

      I’m an impatient reviser. I like the craft of revising, and I think it’s the revision stage where the writer really plies his trade, turning a tolerable draft into something that resembles art. But when you’re anxious for the world to read your work, the process can take so darn long! πŸ™‚

      Have a great week too, Kim!

  7. Love the concept of your novel! I can’t watch The Jetsons without getting confused about space and technology, otherwise I would volunteer πŸ™‚

    It sounds like you’re making good progress – here’s to another week of it!

    • cds says:

      Maybe you should consider, Jennifer. I’d say the novel leans far more on the historical side than the sci-fi side. Pearl is not the most technology-savvy alien–her race think tape recorders are the coolest technology that side of Andromeda… so this is no work of Azimov! πŸ™‚

  8. Wow, what a great story concept. Good luck with all your revisions and embedding plot goodies. I think this part is always harder than writing the actual story:-) You’re doing great!

    • cds says:

      Thanks, Kristi! I think you’re right–the revisions are always harder than the first draft. Not that getting the story down can’t be challenging, but molding and shaping that initial idea into something that’s a joy to read takes far more of one’s writerly skill. I think so, anyway. πŸ™‚

  9. Your doing great so far. I really should join in on the words sprints, they are so helpful and the motivation would help me push myself. I love your query, the concept sounds great and original.

    • cds says:

      Thanks for the encouragement, Prerna. Yes, join in on the Word Sprints. The YA Buccaneers usually post an article advertising them, and if you follow them on Twitter, they normally Tweet in advance. πŸ™‚

  10. Cynthia says:

    I love ABBA’s Dancing Queen and I love Downton Abbey. Sounds like you have some fun things going on with your story here.

    Many good novels have sucked me in too, and have kept me from my writing. But at least I can tell myself that good readers make good writers, and therefore, I’m merely doing my “enrichment homework.”

    I followed you on Twitter recently. Feel free to follow back to stay in touch!

    • cds says:

      I think my story’s pretty cool–but you’d expect that. πŸ˜‰ Thanks for the Twitter follow–I’ve followed you back. I don’t follow everyone back, but certainly blog friends get a follow-back. πŸ™‚

  11. What a fabulous query! I’m hooked!

    • cds says:

      Thank you, Anya! I actually wrote the first draft of the query before I finished the first draft of the novel. It really helped me focus on the key elements of the story (and highlight weaknesses I needed to correct). It went through a few more revisions after I’d written the novel, but I recommend that approach. I think it helps. And then, when you’re ready to query, you already have one written! πŸ™‚

  12. katyupperman says:

    Sounds like you’re doing fabulously, Colin. I love your query blurb; I’ve never read anything quite like it — so unique! Can’t wait to hear about how it’s received once you start querying. Something tells me that things are going to go very well. πŸ™‚

    • cds says:

      Thank you so much for your encouragement, Katy! I certainly hope there’s an interested agent and publisher out there–I can’t wait for people to read it. Not before it’s been through the hands of some Awesome Beta Readers though… πŸ™‚

  13. sbcrispell says:

    Openings are so hard, aren’t they? Especially when you’re building a world and the info is all super important. Your story sounds really cool though! So, congrats on revising it and feeling good about where it stands now.

    • cds says:

      I’d say that starting sentence is the hardest part of the novel to write. The first paragraph sets the tone for the rest of the work. Those opening words can determine whether someone reads the other 70K+ words, or moves on to something else. No pressure…! πŸ™‚

      Thanks, Susan. πŸ™‚

  14. Adrianne says:

    Openings are tough but when you get them right it’s so amazing. Have a great week!

  15. winterbayne says:

    Good Luck on getting a great mix of Betas! It is nerve racking for me.

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