Novice
For the A-to-Z Blogging Challenge this year, I’m posting a 100 word piece of flash fiction every day. It might be a self-contained story, or a scene–whatever, it’ll be fiction, and it’ll be over in a flash! Today’s story is…
Novice
I gave the man a benign smile from within my hood. The large cassock sleeves hid my sweaty palms. I had practiced many times; but this was for real.
We walked to the small chapel, and I ushered him inside. He knelt at the rail, and I came alongside him. I crossed myself. He glanced sideways.
“What now?”
“I have a message from Kallen,” I said, slipping my right hand into my left sleeve. Three thuds to the chest. The man fell.
I don’t know what scared me more: that it was my first hit, or that I enjoyed it.
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Great job. Like the last line.
~Patricia Lynne~
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Patricia Lynne, YA Author
Thanks, Patricia. Actually, I’m quite pleased with this one. Though it’s more the details and structural things I like about it than the actual story itself.
Ooh, an assassin pretending to be a monk. Love it!
Thank you, Melanie. I thought this would make for a nice twist, and a play on the word.
Well, it might be a good thing (for him) that he enjoys it since it’s apparently what he wants to do with this life. Bad for everyone else
Unless he knows it’s wrong… the dilemma of being good at something that is both illegal and morally objectionable. That could, in fact, be the basis of an interesting story…
Nicely done! (I guess that could apply to the assassin, but I meant you.)
I like the way you set up the scene, even with the brevity of words.
Thanks, Chuck. And the assassin thanks you too…