That Day Is Done

TThis is my fifth April A-to-Z Challenge. The past couple of years, I’ve written 100-word flash fiction each day. This year I’m doing the same, only with a twist: each day’s story will be inspired by the title of a Paul McCartney song. So let’s continue the fun with…

THAT DAY IS DONE

Five minutes late.

I hurry to my desk, but not before the boss calls me into his office. First time late in six years, but he doesn’t care. No written warning, but his scathing glare says as much.

Meeting at 10. Unprepared for questions on the project. Lots of passive aggression about my competence and work ethic.

Three reports by 2 pm. Is this punishment?

Five o’clock. Cell phone buzzes.

My agent.

I sigh. Can’t be good. Another rejection?

Multi-publisher auction.

Book sold.

Seven figures.

“Same again tomorrow?” says Carly as I print my resignation letter.

I don’t think so.

Sunday is our day off, so check back on Monday for “U”…

“That Day Is Done” is a song written by Paul McCartney and Elvis Costello. Paul recorded a version of it for his 1989 album “Flowers in the Dirt.” Elvis Costello has performed the song live on a couple of occasions.

Here’s Paul’s version:

And here’s Elvis singing it solo, with Steve Nieve on piano, at The Concert for Linda in April 1999 (a charity event celebrating the life of Linda McCartney):

According to SongFacts, Costello said this about the song: “I had a fair opening statement and all these images. It was from a real thing, my grandmother’s funeral. It was sort of serious. He (McCartney) said, ‘Yes, that’s all good, all those images.’ But quite often when you’re writing a song about something personal, what it means to you can sometimes get in the way of what it can mean to somebody else. It needed a release. He said, ‘It needs something like this…’ and he just sat down and played the chorus. It was sort of like ‘Let It Be,’ the creation of a semi-secular gospel song. It was quite shocking when he did that bit. Then when you realise that’s what he does. Then he sung the hell out of it. That’s him, really.”

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Colin D. Smith, writer of blogs and fiction of various sizes.

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24 Responses

  1. Rian Durant says:

    This made me smile so much! It’s easy to miss a blog among 1.5 K but I;m glad I found it. I love flash fiction and I’ll definitely read the rest.

    Rian’s Randomness

  2. Lisca says:

    What a great song! I love the Elvis Costello version with that fantastic piano part. I only wish Elvis would have sung in tune. It grates me…
    Love the flash fiction.

    • cds says:

      Thanks, Lisca. I have to say, I like Elvis’s rendition, too. (Goes without saying I like Paul’s!) Yeah, he’s not always hitting the notes as accurately as Macca, but he sings with such passion (and he’s singing live), I can forgive him that.

  3. Ha. Good! Loved it.

  4. Dena Pawling says:

    Wishful thinking!

    Horrible day jobs make for great stories. And I thought you weren’t supposed to quit your day job until you actually held the money in your hands. No “show me the money.” It’s “deposit the money.” Altho, with a job like you’ve described, I suppose the MC can’t be faulted………….

    • cds says:

      Ha–yes, well, real life doesn’t always make for good drama (sometimes it does, but not always). I’m sure this is how many feel, though. 🙂

  5. Celia Reaves says:

    Yes, wait for the check to clear before quitting – but this is fiction, after all. This is the scene we aspiring writers imagine! Thanks.

  6. Yessss! I’ve got a smile ear to ear reading this one. But, Colin, when did you start writing fantasy? Or is that just what I bring to it as the reader? Ugh, probably so. Great job here.

    • cds says:

      Thank you, John! One of the things I like about flash fiction is the opportunity to try different genres. You notice I didn’t specify that the characters were humans. They could well be elves. Don’t you think elves desire to be published? 🙂

      • Ha! I think elves are already being punished by virtue of being an elf. Especially the non-union elves working at the North Pole with nothing resembling a 40-hour work week for the final quarter of every year.

        • cds says:

          Indeed, you could set this story at the North Pole. The poor office elf, under Santa’s despotic glare, run off her feet trying to do her job, hoping against probability that her novel, GOD HELPS THOSE WHO HELP THEM ELVES finds a publisher… 😉

  7. Me says:

    Oh man don’t we all wish for a day to end like that? It’s not even an ending; it’s a new beginning!

  8. Oh gosh, if only! LOL This was fun, the dream of all writers, to be lifted from poverty and drudgery by success! Loved it!

    • cds says:

      Yes, absolutely. This one is definitely for all my writer friends, though, as has been rightly pointed out, you don’t want to quit your day job until that advance hits your bank account. And even then, you probably want some assurance of a steady income, which is why some published writers don’t go full time for years. But we can dream… 🙂

  9. Ah yes, the dream. And I love Elvis Costello so this one made me extra happy.

  10. Loved this one, Colin – although I’m with John; at first I thought this was fantasy. Then my brain kicked in, and I realised it was more like prophetic writing! 🙂

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