Cranky Crustacean

It’s “C”-Day on the A-to-Z Challenge, where I am attempting to write a 100-word flash fiction story every day based on commenters’ prompts. Thank you so much for yesterday’s suggestions. I thought about all of them, but a story formed around one more quickly than the others, so that’s the one I’ve written. With special thanks to debscarey for the prompt, here’s a lovely little story that only a vegetarian could write called…

CRANKY CRUSTACEAN

Jim picked a crab from the bowl and jabbed it with his fork.

“How ya s’posed to eat this?”

Elliot smiled. “Easy.” He took the crab, and gripped its claw with the crab cracker. He squeezed until the shell cracked.

“See?” said Elliot. “Easyyyyowww!”

The other claw snapped around his wrist.

“Ain’t they s’posed to be dead?” said Jim.

The bowl tipped. Crabs started limping out toward them. Jim grabbed a knife and drove it into one of the crabs. It kept coming.

“They are dead!” said Elliot.

Elliot screamed, but by the time help arrived, it was too late.

Tomorrow’s 100-word story will begin with the letter D. But what will it be called? What prompt will inspire it? That’s up to YOU! Please offer your suggestions in the comments.

cds

Colin D. Smith, writer of blogs and fiction of various sizes.

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20 Responses

  1. See?! That’s why I don’t eat seafood. I don’t trust them.

    What a great story. I love it.

  2. Dena Pawling says:

    I’m allergic to shellfish, so fortunately I won’t ever have to experience the cranky lot.

    D is for daring and dumbfounded, because you’re not pre-writing your posts. Also drool, because why not?

  3. Celia Reaves says:

    Not just cranky, but UNDEAD cranky. Yow!

    A few ideas for D:
    Double-Dog Dare
    Demented Dentist
    Donut Device
    Down the Deep, Dark, Dank Drain [choose the adjective(s) that work best!]

  4. lissa says:

    I don’t like this much, makes me think of horror movies for some reason.

    suggestions:
    death by a fat cat
    dancing at the desperate crab alley

    have a lovely day.

    p.s., my a-z post is here:
    A Crimson and Gold Morning

    • cds says:

      Sorry, lissa! Maybe the next one will be more to your taste… I don’t know–I haven’t written it yet! Yikes. But some good ideas there. Thank you. 🙂

  5. jazzfeathers says:

    This is one of the shortest horror sotries I’ve ever read.
    Good job!

  6. debscarey says:

    I literally “Woohoo’d” out loud! Thanks for picking my suggestion and I absolutely love the story. I’ll be visiting again (and making suggestions if inspiration strikes). 🙂

    • cds says:

      YAY! So glad you got a kick out of seeing your suggestion used, Debs. I’m not sure how exactly I got from cranky crustacean to zombie crabs, but when my mind went there, I knew I had to write it. Thank YOU! 🙂

  7. This is why you should never eating anything that still has it’s defenses.

  8. alanagarrigues says:

    How FUN! Love the theme and the interactive element of it all… and nice work on three great 100-word stories so far. I may never eat a crab again without feeling a pinch on my wrist…

    Okay, I’ll bite… some ideas for D:

    Dastardly Deed
    Double Dare
    Duck!
    Dilemma: To Do, or Not To Do?

    I will definitely be checking in on your doable dose of stories every few days throughout A to Z. 🙂

    Alana
    (posting A through Z over at http://www.ofloveandlight.org)

  9. AJ Blythe says:

    Zombie crabs! That cracks me up.

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