Reconnaissance

Day… what day is it? Friday? And we’re at the letter R in the A-to-Z Blogging Challenge. I’m writing 100-word flash fiction stories based on commenter-suggested prompts. You all had some good ideas, too, some of which I may use for longer stories. For today’s, however, I chose one of AJ Blythe‘s prompts. One of the things I like about flash fiction is it gives you the opportunity to dabble in different styles and genres without the commitment of a novel or short story. This is another experiment. I hope you enjoy it!

RECONNAISSANCE

Three buildings. One large flanked by two smaller. Possibly weapons sheds.

Gil took out his phone and sketched a map of the locations.

“Don’t move!”

He felt the barrel of a gun against his head, so he complied. His captor marched him to the large building and pushed him toward an officer behind a desk.

“He was making notes on this.” His captor threw Gil’s phone to the officer, who inspected it.

“We’ll keep this,” he said. “Lock him in the store house.”

From the safety of the smaller building, Gil gave the command: “Detonate.”

Shame. He liked that phone.

Can I get some suggestions for tomorrow’s letter, S? Only eight more to go! 🙂

P.S.: For my Patrons, there’s a bonus R story on my Patreon site. Support my writing habit at $1/month or more, and you can have access to this and other stories posted there!

cds

Colin D. Smith, writer of blogs and fiction of various sizes.

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19 Responses

  1. Jane Burgess says:

    Different but still a great read😊

    Simple Simon
    Soggy sandwiches
    Slimmer of the year
    Sizzling sausages
    Summer romance

  2. AJ Blythe says:

    Nice. I love cool gadgety stuff like that (very Bond).

    Hard to narrow a list of S words down: slither, scream, sarcophagus, spirit

    • cds says:

      Thank you, AJ. S is definitely one of the easier words. Just as well–there are some toughies coming up. You picked a good selection there. Hmmm…

  3. Dena Pawling says:

    This one was fun =)

    S is for Soft-boiled egg. Sunshine and rainbows. Soup or salad. Sick to my stomach. Sleepless in Seattle. Sadistic Salamander. And last but not least, Silly Colin and his crazy theme.

    Dena
    https://denapawling.blogspot.com/

  4. Claire W Bobrow says:

    Slumber, sardine, scintillate, sashay. Enjoying all the stories, Colin!

    • cds says:

      Yay! I’m happy people are actually enjoying these stories. They’re fun to write despite the stress of having only a few hours to write them! 🙂 Thanks for the prompt suggestions.

  5. @breakerofthings says:

    Nice – but I do wonder at GIl getting caught so easily.

    Is it too obvious to suggest “short story”? I recken you could still have fun with it!

    @BreakerOfThings, Calling by from
    Fiction Can be Fun For #AprilA2Z/#AtoZChallenge
    (Sometimes found at A Back of the Envelope Calculation)

    • cds says:

      Gil was, sad to say, the victim of the 100-word limit. I just didn’t have enough words to show off his stealth skills. It was pure misfortune on his part, I assure you. An enemy guard just happening to be at the right place at the right time. Given another 100 words, you would have been impressed, I’m sure. 🙂

      Ha! I’m so tempted to do “Short Story”… thank you BreakerOfThings. 🙂

      • @breakerofthings says:

        That limit is a killer! Still a great story though. Will Gil return?

        Have you come across thedrabble.wordpress.com?

        • cds says:

          Will Gil return? We’ll have to see. With the right prompt, maybe… 🙂 Yes, I have come across The Drabble. I’ve submitted to them once, but I’ve yet to hear back. I don’t doubt I’ll try again soon.

  6. debscarey says:

    Ah – they took Gil’s bait 🙂

    Slugger, sacrifice, sarcasm

    A-Zing this year at:
    FictionCanBeFun
    Normally found at:
    DebsDespatches

    • cds says:

      I don’t think Gil planned the move with the phone, but he’s such a cool-headed, quick-thinking soldier, he managed to improvise a plan-B. 🙂

  7. debscarey says:

    Oh, oh, oh … I forgot serendipity

  8. Atherton says:

    Excellent work. 🙂 As for “S,” Sell-By Date, Scarify, Scarecrow, Sodden, Stilted…

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